Writer’s Prompt: Echoes from the Pond: A Brother’s Secret, Buried in the Mud

He came to fish for peace—but what he reeled in was a nightmare buried for decades.

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The pond hadn’t changed much—still murky, still quiet, still cradled in the gnarled arms of old cypress trees. Retired detective Frank Mallory cast his line into the water, hoping to catch something that might silence the noise in his head. This pond had once been a playground, a sanctuary—until the day his younger brother, Timmy, disappeared. Frank was twelve. Timmy was ten. One moment they were laughing, the next, Timmy was gone—vanished without a trace. No one ever found him.

Frank wandered the bank now, decades later, nostalgia colliding with sorrow. A misstep took him through a brittle patch of underbrush—and that’s when he saw it. A curved bit of white jutting from the ground. Then another. And another. Skeletal remains—small, fragile bones, too small to belong to a grown man.

His hands trembled.

Could this be Timmy? Had the truth been here all along, quietly rotting beneath the soil and memory?


3 Reflection Questions:

  1. How does guilt shape the detective’s view of the past—and the present discovery?
  2. What emotional and ethical dilemmas arise when a long-buried mystery resurfaces?
  3. How might the truth challenge everything the detective thought he knew about that day?

Writer’s Prompt: Coffee, Corpses, and Complicated Feelings: Another Day at the Precinct


They solve murders before breakfast, argue about who stole the last donut, and keep falling for the wrong people—sometimes each other. Welcome to the city’s most dysfunctional, oddly lovable detective unit.

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Welcome to the 13th Precinct—a slightly shabbier cousin to McBain’s 87th. The squad includes a hard-nosed lieutenant who writes poetry in secret, a forensic expert with four ex-wives and an alpaca farm, and two junior detectives who keep solving homicides while trying (and failing) not to fall for each other. Their latest case involves a local politician, a bakery explosion, and a trail of clues that somehow all point to a missing cat named Pistachio. The crime is messy, but the real drama? That’s brewing behind the badge.


❓ Three Reader Questions:

  1. What secrets are your detectives keeping from each other—and themselves?
  2. How does working in close proximity with life-and-death stakes affect their personal relationships?
  3. Can justice be served when love keeps getting in the way?

Writing Prompt: Your Mission: Write a Spy Thriller That Won’t Put the CIA to Sleep

Tired of reading thrillers where the only thing undercover is the writer’s talent? Let’s fix that. Here’s a prompt that’ll ignite your creative fuse faster than a bugged briefcase in Berlin.


Writing Prompt:

A CIA operative posing as an American embassy janitor in Prague intercepts a late-night encrypted message—one that wasn’t meant for the agency, but for them. It’s signed by a codename they haven’t heard since the Berlin Wall fell… their mother’s. And suddenly, sweeping the marble floor isn’t the only thing they’re cleaning up.


3 Questions to Dive Deeper:

  1. What is the operative’s personal connection to the mission—and how does it blur the line between duty and loyalty?
  2. What was buried in their past (or in someone else’s) that’s now being unearthed, and who stands to gain—or die—from its exposure?
  3. What happens when the agency realizes the operative knows more than they should… and trust becomes the real weapon?

✒️ Writers’ Wisdom ~ Dicken’s Opening Paragraph to A Tale of Two Cities

Opening Paragraph from Dicken’s, A Tale of Two Cities

It was the best of times, it was the worst of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness, it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity, it was the season of Light, it was the season of Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair, we had everything before us, we had nothing before us, we were all going direct to Heaven, we were all going direct the other way — in short, the period was so far like the present period, that some of its noisiest authorities insisted on its being received, for good or for evil, in the superlative degree of comparison only.

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✒️ Writers’ Wisdom ~ Graham Greene’s Opening Paragraph in “Brighton’s Rock”

Opening Paragraph from Graham Greene’s Brighton Rock

Hale knew, before he had been in Brighton three hours, that they meant to murder him. With his inky fingers and his bitten nails, his manner cynical and nervous, anybody could tell he didn’t belong – belong to the early summer sun, the cool Whitsun wind off the sea, the holiday crowd. They came in by train from Victoria every five minutes, rocked down Queen’s Road standing on the tops of the little local trams, stepped off in bewildered multitudes into fresh and glittering air: the new silver paint sparkled on the piers, the cream houses ran away into the west like a pale Victorian water-colour; a race in miniature motors, a band playing, flower gardens in bloom below the front, an aeroplane advertising something for the health in pale vanishing clouds across the sky.

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✒️ Writers’ Wisdom ~ The Best Part of Writing

“That is the best part of writing: finding the hidden treasures, giving sparkle to worn out events, invigorating the tired soul with imagination, creating some kind of truth with many lies.”

~ Isabel Allende

✒️ Writers’ Wisdom ~ What Writers Influence Your Style?

“As for the writers who have influenced me they are many. Hemingway, Chandler, Ray Bradbury, Richard Matheson, Charles Beaumont, William Goldman, Flannery O’Conner, Carson McCullers, F. Scott Fitzgerald, and so many others. As a kid Kipling and Edgar Rice Burroughs, and Robert E. Howard.”

~ Joe R. Lansdale

💡 Something to Think About

As a kid, I never realized we were poor. I grew up in a 4 room cold water flat. At times, I thought the train was coming through the bedroom. My parents never complained. We ate simple. Today, I see these items on Italian bistro menus and laugh at the price. My parents made sure my brother and I didn’t hang out with the wrong crowd (the consequences would have been devastating to us). We picked blueberries in the swamps, grew tomatoes and onions in a garden, and picked button mushrooms in the fall. My parents made a bigger difference for me than any teacher (and I had some good ones). Parenting is a most important role.

🖋 Writers’ Wisdom ~ What’s the Secret to Good Writing?

“Have something to say, and say it as clearly as you can. That is the only secret.”

~ Matthew Arnold

🖋 Writers’ Wisdom ~ Caste Self Doubt to the Side

When you feel that creeping self-doubt, acknowledge it. Write down your feelings in your journal in your journal… and then continue with your writing.”
Joanna Penn

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