Flash Fiction Prompt: She Vanished at Noon—But Her Shadow Stayed Behind

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Every small town has a mystery. This one started when the sun was highest… and her footprints led nowhere.

First Line:

The clock struck noon, and in that exact second, Josie Finch dissolved into sunlight—leaving behind a pair of shoes and a pool of rainwater on dry ground.


Starting Paragraph:

It wasn’t raining that day. Not a cloud above Crater Ridge. Just a dry, dust-blown summer Tuesday when Josie Finch walked into the square wearing her red boots and vanished in front of four stunned witnesses. Old Man Kemp said her outline shimmered like heat waves, then poof—nothing. Just the boots and a perfect circle of water on the sunbaked bricks. Sheriff Bell tried to cordon off the area, but no one wanted to step near it. Even the pigeons gave it space. Her brother, Davey, sat on the courthouse steps for hours, staring at the puddle like it might offer a clue. By sunset, rumors grew teeth—aliens, government experiments, a curse whispered from old Choctaw stories. The shadow her body cast at high noon never faded. It stayed etched in the bricks like a scorched ghost. And now, every day at noon, it returns—waiting, maybe, for something. Or someone.


3 Questions to Spark Flash Fiction:

  1. Why did Josie disappear—and what secret was she hiding before she vanished?
  2. What significance does the puddle—and her shadow—hold in the larger story?
  3. What happens when someone dares to step into the exact spot where she stood?


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