How far would you go when grief meets rage? This father’s loss ignites a war on the streets.
Grab-Hold First Line
The night his son died from fentanyl, Mark buried his grief in a shallow grave beside his mercy.
Flash Fiction Prompt
Every parent fears the phone call. Mark got his at 2:14 a.m.—a cold voice, a sterile report: his son, gone. Not from recklessness, not from adventure, but from poison disguised as escape. The fentanyl had stolen his boy, leaving only silence in his room and fury in Mark’s chest. The funeral was quiet, polite, and utterly wrong. People whispered about healing, about moving on, but Mark knew there was no moving on—only moving through. And he would move through blood.
By day, he wore the face of a grieving father, shoulders heavy, words slow. By night, he studied the alleys, the bars, the dealers who traded death for cash. He mapped their faces, their cars, their habits. He no longer cared about laws written in ink; his law was written in loss.
Each night the city’s underworld tightened its grip, but Mark was already pulling at the threads. The grieving father was gone. In his place stood a vigilante, sharpened by rage, unafraid of dying because the worst had already happened.
If you were writing this story, would you make Mark a hero, a villain, or something in between?
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