Writer’s Prompt: Inherited Rage: Is Violence Written in Our DNA?

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Some family legacies are written in ink; others are carved in lead.

The Bloodline’s Ledger

The desk lamp flickered, casting long, skeletal shadows across the news clippings. Al Subert’s hands didn’t shake, and that was the problem. They were steady—heavy and cold, like his father’s.

The headlines from 1984 were yellowed and brittle, smelling of damp basements and copper. “SUBERT ACQUITTED IN DOCKSIDE MASSACRE.” The official story was a lack of evidence. The unofficial story, the one Al was currently piecing together through his father’s private ledgers, was written in a shorthand of debts and “disposals.”

The rage didn’t hit like a lightning bolt; it rose like a tide. It was a thick, viscous heat behind his eyes. He read a handwritten note tucked into a ledger: “Kid’s got the eyes. Hope he doesn’t have the hands.”

Al looked at his hands.

A floorboard creaked behind him. Al didn’t startle. Instead, he felt a predatory thrill. His pulse slowed to a rhythmic, deadly drumbeat. He reached into the desk drawer, his fingers brushing the cold steel of the snub-nosed .38 his father had left behind.

“Al?” a voice whispered. It was his wife, Sarah. She looked small in the doorway, framed by the darkness of the hallway. “It’s 3:00 AM. Come to bed.”

Al didn’t turn around immediately. He stared at the ledger, then at the reflection of the gun in the window glass. The “ghosts” his shrink warned him about weren’t in the paper; they were in his marrow. He felt a sudden, violent urge to silence the world—starting with the floorboard that wouldn’t stop creaking.

He stood up slowly, the weight of the steel hidden in his palm.


How does Al Subert’s night end? Does the cycle of violence claim another victim, or can he drop the gun before the shadow swallows him whole? You decide the final act.


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