Flash Fiction Monday: The Man in the Stands

A father’s fury sits in the stands like a coiled snake 

The Man in the Stands

“The boy stepped up to the plate, shoulders tight beneath a jersey a size too big. He blinked against the sun, lifted the bat, and whispered to himself, Don’t miss this time.

From the stands, his father, Alex Kinsela, watched every twitch and flinch. Ten years in special forces had trained him to notice movement—the shift of an enemy, the flutter of fear—but nothing rattled him like seeing his own son afraid to swing.

“That kid is pitiful. Look at him. He closes his eyes when he swings. The coach should kick him off the team,” Max Waters said, loud enough for half the bleachers to hear.

Alex gripped the bench with both hands as if each hand were wrapped around Max Water’s neck.  He had to do something with his hands or he’d break Water’s neck. 

“The kid is only ten years old,” Alex said.

“Doesn’t matter. He’s a loser and belongs on the bench.” 

Alex turned toward Waters. He knew he could snap Water’s neck as easily as he could snap a twig. 

Alex’s kid  fouled off two pitches. He took two balls and watched a strike sail over the middle of the plate.

“You’re out,” the umpire called.

“He’s a bum,” Waters yelled and added a Bronx cheer with extra venom. 

“Give the kid a break. You think he wanted to strike out?” Alex said.

“The punk didn’t even swing. His father doesn’t have the time to teach his kid how to play ball,” Max Waters said it loud enough for people sitting around him to hear. 

Alex Kinsela closed his eyes and thought, “You need to be taught a lesson and I’m going to be your teacher.”

For the next week Alex was closer to Max Waters than his shadow. Where Max Waters went, Alex was not far behind.

A week later, Waters was back in the stands this time picking on a different kid. “Take him out. He doesn’t know how to pitch. He’s a loser.” Waters yelled. 

Alex watched and smiled. He knew Waters would take his son home and then head out to a bar to have a few beers. 

Alex followed Waters to the bar and pulled next to Waters’  pickup truck. He made himself comfortable and waited the way a rattlesnake waits for an unsuspecting field mouse.  

The difference between Alex and a rattlesnake is that the rattlesnake will give you a warning if you come too close.

Two hours later, Waters came out arguing with a drinking buddy, “The guy’s a bum. He should never be in the major leagues. I could play better with one arm tied around my back.”

Water’s walked to his truck. He opened the door and felt an arm around his neck squeezing the air out of him the way a boa kills its prey.

He heard the words, “Resist and I’ll snap your neck.”

Alex slipped a black bag over Water’s head, secured his hands behind with flex cuffs.

Thirty minutes later, they were in an abandoned warehouse. 

“Is this a kidnapping? How much do you want?” Water asked. “ Don’t kill me.”

“It’s lesson time. I’m going to take the bag off your head. I’m standing behind you. If you turn around before I tell you and you see me, I’m going to kill you. Understand?” Alex said from his baclava.

“Yes, yes, please don’t kill me.”

A large screen tv turned on. A five-minute loop began to play. There was Waters drinking beer, holding a woman ten years his junior on his lap. There was Water tossing dollar bills at strippers. There were Waters’ emails trashing his boss. 

“Where’d you get this?” Waters  shouted.

“It doesn’t matter. The question is, ‘Will this go online?’

“No. Please don’t.”

“If you ever trash another kid in your life, this goes public.”

“Please—whatever you want—just don’t tell my wife.”

From the corner, a new voice answered—not Alex’s.

“Oh, I already know,” she said.

Waters froze.

Alex slipped out the side door as the woman approached, her heels clicking against the concrete.

Some lessons, he thought, are better taught by those we’ve betrayed.

Two hours later, a voice from a mechanical box said, “Your wife is on her way. She should be here  in ten minutes. Have fun.”

Why Don’t They Teach Common Sense in College?


Sometimes it takes a parent’s wisdom—and one shocking moment on the street—to remind us why common sense matters more than degrees.

My dad, with his eighth grade education. would often confront my brother and I who both had doctorates and ask us this simple question: “Why don’t they teach common sense in college.” Neither one of us had an answer for that. Although he’s been dead for some years, his voice came back to me last night as I was out for a walk. I live in a quiet neighborhood and the street is not busy. Coming down the street toward me was a late model Lexus. There was nothing unusual about that. As the car drew closer to me, I noticed the driver. The driver was a seven year old girl (that’s my guess) who was sitting on her father’s lap with both of her hands on the steering wheel while her father I assumed worked the pedals. My first thought was this guy has no common sense. My second thought was unprintable.. For the sake of some entertaining his daughter, he was risking his daughter’s life, his life, and the lives of other people. Common sense is important. All it takes is a 10 second reflection on what could happen. Hey dad, thanks for the advice. I’ve learned most of it the hard way.

💡 Points to Ponder

  1. Is common sense something we’re born with, or something we cultivate through life’s hard lessons?
  2. How often do we prioritize “fun” or convenience over safety without stopping to think about the consequences?
  3. What role do parents and mentors play in shaping our ability to make sound, everyday decisions?
  4. Could schools or colleges integrate practical wisdom into their teaching—or is it something only real life can deliver?
  5. What “common sense” lesson have you learned the hard way that you wish someone had taught you sooner?

The Great Pear Heist: A 10-Year-Old, a Pitchfork, and a Life Lesson


What do you do when a pitchfork-wielding man chases you for stealing pears? If you’re 10, you run—pear bag in hand—and hope your dad doesn’t find out.

What would you do if you were 10 years old and some adult was chasing you with a pitchfork screaming at you? This happened to me. I did this guy had a wonderful pear tree. It was August and the peers were ripe. My friend Mickey and I would sneak up to his property and stare at the Paris. If they were a pair or two on the ground, we make a dash for it grab it and run. This day Nikki and I laid on the ground near a blackberry, bush and starred at the pear tree 50 feet away. I had a small burlap bag with me as Mickey. We were going to grab as many pairs as possible and then take them to a local bodega and sell them to the owner. The owner of a pear tree and several others, and his yard was an older man. On your 10 years old everybody looks old. He did have white hair. And that made him old in our eyes. He was outside working on his grapevines. They were closer to his house. His back was turned into the pear tree. I turned to Mickey and said, “let’s go.”

Mickey shook his head. He said, “we’ll get caught.”

“no way. His back is turned he won’t even hear us,” I replied. I know sooner spoke, and I was up and running toward the tree. I wasn’t taking Paris off the ground. I was picking the premium pairs off of this tree. My burlap bag was half full when I heard a stream of words only my dad would say when he was angry. I looked to the grapevine, and the old man had a pitchfork in his hand and was running toward me. I took off for the rear of his property. There was a ledge that dropped 4 feet. I I cradle the bag that contained my fortune and jumped. I pressed myself against the side of that drop. I looked up and I could see the man above me staring further down the hill. He didn’t see me, but he was shaking his pitchfork letting me know that if he caught me, I would be sitting on the end of it. My heart was beating so loud I thought he may have heard it. He left. I waited a good 10 minutes and then made my way back up over the edge of the drop. He was no longer outside and I raced for the blackberry bushes and my escape route. Mickey was nowhere to be seen.

I did sell my pears at the local bodega. I only got a couple bucks. But that was a lot for a kid 10 years old. Once they had the money, I’d have to figure out how to tell my mom and dad how I got it because they would find out that I had an extra couple bucks.

before I could tell them, my dad calls me in the living room and says where’d you get the pairs that you sold at the bodega? How did he know? I waited for his belt to come off. I knew I was going to get several wax across my butt. It wouldn’t have been the first time. I must’ve been a slow learner. But my dad said, “I love peas that my favorite fruit you should’ve brought them home.” some years later I realized I was more like my dad than I imagined.

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