Flash Fiction Monday: The Man in the Stands

A father’s fury sits in the stands like a coiled snake 

The Man in the Stands

“The boy stepped up to the plate, shoulders tight beneath a jersey a size too big. He blinked against the sun, lifted the bat, and whispered to himself, Don’t miss this time.

From the stands, his father, Alex Kinsela, watched every twitch and flinch. Ten years in special forces had trained him to notice movement—the shift of an enemy, the flutter of fear—but nothing rattled him like seeing his own son afraid to swing.

“That kid is pitiful. Look at him. He closes his eyes when he swings. The coach should kick him off the team,” Max Waters said, loud enough for half the bleachers to hear.

Alex gripped the bench with both hands as if each hand were wrapped around Max Water’s neck.  He had to do something with his hands or he’d break Water’s neck. 

“The kid is only ten years old,” Alex said.

“Doesn’t matter. He’s a loser and belongs on the bench.” 

Alex turned toward Waters. He knew he could snap Water’s neck as easily as he could snap a twig. 

Alex’s kid  fouled off two pitches. He took two balls and watched a strike sail over the middle of the plate.

“You’re out,” the umpire called.

“He’s a bum,” Waters yelled and added a Bronx cheer with extra venom. 

“Give the kid a break. You think he wanted to strike out?” Alex said.

“The punk didn’t even swing. His father doesn’t have the time to teach his kid how to play ball,” Max Waters said it loud enough for people sitting around him to hear. 

Alex Kinsela closed his eyes and thought, “You need to be taught a lesson and I’m going to be your teacher.”

For the next week Alex was closer to Max Waters than his shadow. Where Max Waters went, Alex was not far behind.

A week later, Waters was back in the stands this time picking on a different kid. “Take him out. He doesn’t know how to pitch. He’s a loser.” Waters yelled. 

Alex watched and smiled. He knew Waters would take his son home and then head out to a bar to have a few beers. 

Alex followed Waters to the bar and pulled next to Waters’  pickup truck. He made himself comfortable and waited the way a rattlesnake waits for an unsuspecting field mouse.  

The difference between Alex and a rattlesnake is that the rattlesnake will give you a warning if you come too close.

Two hours later, Waters came out arguing with a drinking buddy, “The guy’s a bum. He should never be in the major leagues. I could play better with one arm tied around my back.”

Water’s walked to his truck. He opened the door and felt an arm around his neck squeezing the air out of him the way a boa kills its prey.

He heard the words, “Resist and I’ll snap your neck.”

Alex slipped a black bag over Water’s head, secured his hands behind with flex cuffs.

Thirty minutes later, they were in an abandoned warehouse. 

“Is this a kidnapping? How much do you want?” Water asked. “ Don’t kill me.”

“It’s lesson time. I’m going to take the bag off your head. I’m standing behind you. If you turn around before I tell you and you see me, I’m going to kill you. Understand?” Alex said from his baclava.

“Yes, yes, please don’t kill me.”

A large screen tv turned on. A five-minute loop began to play. There was Waters drinking beer, holding a woman ten years his junior on his lap. There was Water tossing dollar bills at strippers. There were Waters’ emails trashing his boss. 

“Where’d you get this?” Waters  shouted.

“It doesn’t matter. The question is, ‘Will this go online?’

“No. Please don’t.”

“If you ever trash another kid in your life, this goes public.”

“Please—whatever you want—just don’t tell my wife.”

From the corner, a new voice answered—not Alex’s.

“Oh, I already know,” she said.

Waters froze.

Alex slipped out the side door as the woman approached, her heels clicking against the concrete.

Some lessons, he thought, are better taught by those we’ve betrayed.

Two hours later, a voice from a mechanical box said, “Your wife is on her way. She should be here  in ten minutes. Have fun.”

From Fastballs to Fables: How I Got My Sex Ed on the Sidewalk


Life lessons from a four-room flat, a factory whistle, and a bunch of guys who thought they knew everything.

When I was a kid I walked a bit over mile each day to school. We lived in a six apartment building. Each apartment was a four room cold water flat so close to the railroad tracks the building shook as the express freight trains roared by. Each morning a shoe factory, 50 meters to north, started work at 5 a.m.
The trains shook the walls, the factory shook my sleep, and my friends—well, they shook my understanding of the world. On the way to school I’d meet up with friends from the other apartments and we talk about boy stuff like baseball or football or who was stronger. Once I hit adolescence the talk was still sports but girls played an increasingly bigger role in the conversations. In those days there was no talk about sex in the home. So how did a kid going through pubescence learn about sex? The way most guys did, by listening to the older guys give their wisdom. These gems of wisdom were passed down through generation through crafted art of storytelling. Can you imagine going from playing ball and talking sports to the world described by the older guys? Of course, my friends and I accepted these stories without questioning their authenticity. What’s that experience taught me? Turns out, not everything passed down from the “elders” is gospel—especially when it comes wrapped in a baseball cap and ends with, “Trust me, I know.”

Today’s Thought: You Never Know, Don’t Quit

I’ve always like sports both as a participant and as a fan. Each game is a mystery that unfolds as the game plays out. In some instances what appeared to be certain defeat turns into victory at the last moment. Baseball has an additional quality many other sports do not have. The game of baseball is never decided until the final out. Last night, for example, the team I root for was behind 3 to 1 going into the ninth inning. The mystery unfolded as the first two Red Sox batters made outs. The third batter got on base. The next batter worked the count to 3 balls and 2 strikes. One more strike and the game is over. He swung at the next pitch and hit a home run to tie the game. The Red Sox went on to win the game in the tenth inning. I was excited. The first words out of my mouth were “never quit.” That’s true in sports and it’s true in life. No matter the odds. don’t quit. You never know, you may hit a home run with your next swing of the bat.

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